tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post4273107201887598041..comments2024-03-29T07:16:30.418+00:00Comments on MOODY WRITING: What Is Your Story Missing?mooderinohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01523337588830695638noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-21935271966233729672018-01-24T05:06:20.070+00:002018-01-24T05:06:20.070+00:00I am looking for a smart and creative blog, so I f...I am looking for a smart and creative blog, so I found your blog Which looks good. it is helpful for me. Thanks for the such kind of information <a href="http://www.wearefeatured.com/" rel="nofollow"> your story</a>priyanka Digital Marketinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14626459957131779324noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-15966052695691619832016-09-17T08:04:35.457+01:002016-09-17T08:04:35.457+01:00The blog is good enough I again n again read this....The blog is good enough I again n again read this.<br /><a href="http://typemyessay.net/" rel="nofollow">write my essay</a><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00536647169868657088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-20329585112027508662014-11-08T04:04:05.608+00:002014-11-08T04:04:05.608+00:00As I read this post, I was saying, "yeah, tha...As I read this post, I was saying, "yeah, that makes sense, I get that". Then I read Lexa's comment, "a lot harder than you just made it sound". Yup, I get that, too. LD Mastersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01202135756299574972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-2300174765839934592014-11-08T03:07:42.670+00:002014-11-08T03:07:42.670+00:00This post is rather interesting in the fact that I...This post is rather interesting in the fact that I was just wondering what was missing in my stories. Thanks for sharing this.<br /><br />www.modernworld4.blogspot.comGina Gaohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09032273127593718883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-9490220835740109742014-11-04T21:55:29.610+00:002014-11-04T21:55:29.610+00:00@Dolorah - tact is all well and good, but nothing ...@Dolorah - tact is all well and good, but nothing like being slapped in the face with a cold fish to get your gears turning.<br /><br />@Lexa - always easy to come up with examples, different story when I try to make it work in my own writing.<br /><br />@L - that's quite common, the trick is to right it with padding and then only judge it when you get to the end of the draft. Becomes much easier to see what has to go and what can be woven into the narrative.<br /><br />@Lily - ah, if only it were that straightforward. Unfortunately that can lead to a very convoluted story with too many tangents. mooderinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01523337588830695638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-55041822160811390702014-11-04T20:06:28.311+00:002014-11-04T20:06:28.311+00:00Whenever the story turns boring or unclear, one sh...Whenever the story turns boring or unclear, one should add a hero's enemy or a character with an unusual point of view on everything what happens within the story.Lily Wilsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02696436031777040832noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-69309735522162739062014-11-04T10:44:45.653+00:002014-11-04T10:44:45.653+00:00Interesting post. Most of my work is of the short ...Interesting post. Most of my work is of the short story ilk and I have a problem writing longer pieces as I feel that I am padding out the story.Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03928188713843255078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-4448250867977722742014-11-04T00:54:12.249+00:002014-11-04T00:54:12.249+00:00I know this problem well. Getting that inherent co...I know this problem well. Getting that inherent conflict/goal out there in the open, and then leaving room for twists and turns, is a lot harder than you just made it sound. lolAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07735576044552810103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-39990076035382209812014-11-03T23:57:32.107+00:002014-11-03T23:57:32.107+00:00"a fresh pair of eyes (and a healthy lack of ..."a fresh pair of eyes (and a healthy lack of tact)" is my favorite kind of critique partner.dolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-89259316811744400222014-11-03T23:08:36.412+00:002014-11-03T23:08:36.412+00:00@Elise - well, you do live in France, shouldn'...@Elise - well, you do live in France, shouldn't be too hard to come by.mooderinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01523337588830695638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-27998886759972737602014-11-03T20:42:08.888+00:002014-11-03T20:42:08.888+00:00@Alex - and making sure that connection is on the ...@Alex - and making sure that connection is on the page and not just in your head.mooderinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01523337588830695638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-44826636821196270422014-11-03T20:27:08.786+00:002014-11-03T20:27:08.786+00:00Apparently, my story is missing cake. Lots and lot...Apparently, my story is missing cake. Lots and lots of cake. And eclairs. :)Elise Fallsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14734537117333738468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-29583281266049238802014-11-03T18:05:45.776+00:002014-11-03T18:05:45.776+00:00Basically, it's making sure there is a direct ...Basically, it's making sure there is a direct connection between your main character and the conflict.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.com