tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post5694128942476796751..comments2024-03-29T09:30:44.859+00:00Comments on MOODY WRITING: First Campaigner Challengemooderinohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01523337588830695638noreply@blogger.comBlogger41125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-66992021515871945712011-09-17T13:17:26.749+01:002011-09-17T13:17:26.749+01:00Great job! I loved the suspense and the twist endi...Great job! I loved the suspense and the twist ending! This was really well done.<br /><br />Thanks for stopping by my blog, by the way--I followed back! ^_^Francesca Zappiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16876692064254806825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-91599846816551997442011-09-14T05:23:45.998+01:002011-09-14T05:23:45.998+01:00Oh good heavens! I need to know more...like right ...Oh good heavens! I need to know more...like right now! Good show! I was pulled in and taken for a ride, then spun around and left out in the woods blindfolded with no moon...please tell me you are following this up? I'm beyond captivated.Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00163850266884874892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-350327112465482872011-09-14T02:19:49.899+01:002011-09-14T02:19:49.899+01:00Very nicely done - so intriguing!Very nicely done - so intriguing!Tarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09008153523366719973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-46392329614654981942011-09-13T05:20:03.538+01:002011-09-13T05:20:03.538+01:00What a teaser! And now for the rest of the story....What a teaser! And now for the rest of the story.<br /><br />Lee<br /><a href="http://tossingitout.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Tossing It Out</a>Arlee Birdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11663942782929929334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-91405696568208152692011-09-12T22:26:38.623+01:002011-09-12T22:26:38.623+01:00Oohhhhh! Nice twist!! I love stuff like that!Oohhhhh! Nice twist!! I love stuff like that!Amanda Milnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07582468814920761586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-62472335489658913252011-09-12T00:46:09.979+01:002011-09-12T00:46:09.979+01:00Think I missed this challenge - I need a personal ...Think I missed this challenge - I need a personal assistant.<br />Excellent punch line!<br /><a href="http://clancytales.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Wagging Tales - Blog for Writers</a>Charmaine Clancyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18059559142070140041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-11293738376472167832011-09-12T00:31:38.261+01:002011-09-12T00:31:38.261+01:00That was probably one of the best submissions I...That was probably one of the best submissions I've read from the Crusade. Love the creepy factor. :)Stinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11415189347501942340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-83197058562438022092011-09-11T22:52:37.954+01:002011-09-11T22:52:37.954+01:00An interesting perspective. I like it.An interesting perspective. I like it.Holly Vancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10113438267020711966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-77664790572367258062011-09-11T17:33:14.010+01:002011-09-11T17:33:14.010+01:00Wonderful- so didn't see that endingWonderful- so didn't see that endingAlica McKenna Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12159703224812368401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-64985317127465273152011-09-11T04:59:43.494+01:002011-09-11T04:59:43.494+01:00Wow! I'd like to read more. Thanks! :)Wow! I'd like to read more. Thanks! :)kineticwriting/juliethttp://www.kineticwriting.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-54898183586087890022011-09-10T22:52:16.223+01:002011-09-10T22:52:16.223+01:00Great twist at the end and I like the creepy facto...Great twist at the end and I like the creepy factor.<br /><br />Have a great weekend.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-27443997644602005852011-09-10T21:59:29.567+01:002011-09-10T21:59:29.567+01:00Fantastic Mood. I really enjoyed your entry. A ver...Fantastic Mood. I really enjoyed your entry. A very unexpected twist. <br /><br />Good luck in the challenge.Michael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-14006885302175361222011-09-10T05:24:07.057+01:002011-09-10T05:24:07.057+01:00Ohhhh, no, Poor Daddy. Very neat entry.Ohhhh, no, Poor Daddy. Very neat entry.Dawn M. Hamsherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17782257750640888264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-21767920620945199202011-09-10T00:35:36.048+01:002011-09-10T00:35:36.048+01:00Did not see that end coming! Very nice.
(I am nu...Did not see that end coming! Very nice.<br /><br /><br />(I am number 55 on the linky list)Sonia Lalhttp://storytreasury.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-55977898844720340932011-09-09T23:54:57.532+01:002011-09-09T23:54:57.532+01:00thanks to everyone for commenting, much appreciate...thanks to everyone for commenting, much appreciated.mooderinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01523337588830695638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-21661545154584237872011-09-09T22:15:35.313+01:002011-09-09T22:15:35.313+01:00I saw the twist coming...but then, I saw The Other...I saw the twist coming...but then, I saw <i>The Others</i>, so that sort of twist was already lurking in my brain. Still, very good for flash fiction.The Strayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00439399194077073258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-40282661293990794282011-09-09T20:02:58.048+01:002011-09-09T20:02:58.048+01:00Great ending! But sad that it was the character...Great ending! But sad that it was the character's son who finally proved the existence of the afterlife to him.<br /><br /><a href="http://thegoldeneaglesblog.blogspot.com/2011/09/first-campaigner-challenge-200-word.html" rel="nofollow">My entry</a>.Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-26503259384175318442011-09-09T19:00:25.342+01:002011-09-09T19:00:25.342+01:00Great job. I had no idea where that was going. It&...Great job. I had no idea where that was going. It's amazing how much you can say in 200 words! Thanks!Halli Gomezhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09667712458691917486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-82097956326089196182011-09-09T17:52:12.487+01:002011-09-09T17:52:12.487+01:00Oh... creepy. I actually enjoyed the buildup to th...Oh... creepy. I actually enjoyed the buildup to the ghost getting there more so than the twist at the end, which says a lot because I enjoyed the last line immensely!TL Conwayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08831728300345220814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-60636383372564438712011-09-09T15:43:04.795+01:002011-09-09T15:43:04.795+01:00I love that kind of ending.I love that kind of ending.LD Mastersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01202135756299574972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-22752074018859108452011-09-09T12:29:20.368+01:002011-09-09T12:29:20.368+01:00NIcely done! I love a good plot twist! :-)NIcely done! I love a good plot twist! :-)Crystalhttp://littlebundleofcontradictions.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-78141489272663977662011-09-09T11:24:42.278+01:002011-09-09T11:24:42.278+01:00Thanks for all the comments and kind words. Have b...Thanks for all the comments and kind words. Have been visiting all your entries, and the competition is pretty fierce!mooderinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01523337588830695638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-78995088274349087942011-09-09T09:59:07.696+01:002011-09-09T09:59:07.696+01:00Thought the twist wasn't just a straightforwar...Thought the twist wasn't just a straightforward twist, but a clever one. Good mix of intrigue and supernatural elements. Enjoyed it.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06573809532018015486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-80478216890441830472011-09-09T09:39:35.267+01:002011-09-09T09:39:35.267+01:00Nicely written. Enjoyed that a lot. Good, clean la...Nicely written. Enjoyed that a lot. Good, clean language and a straightforward narrator. Just enough detail to help you fill in the blanks. Good work.Neil Voglerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15306928741501293782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-73666455072443018782011-09-09T07:06:45.034+01:002011-09-09T07:06:45.034+01:00I love the twist in this, Mood!I love the twist in this, Mood!Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12314617048592538691noreply@blogger.com