tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post3742982131990900745..comments2024-03-28T12:40:14.627+00:00Comments on MOODY WRITING: Monotone Writing Is Monotonous Writingmooderinohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01523337588830695638noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-73071787394355392432019-02-23T07:28:08.197+00:002019-02-23T07:28:08.197+00:00Good post, Building is besides a field which is no...Good post, Building is besides a field which is nothing without viable so modelers ought to be equipped with a chance to apply all their comprehension in field. For instructive reason behind existing world's best <a href="https://www.paraphrasingservice.com/how-our-paraphrasing-service-works/" rel="nofollow">https://www.paraphrasingservice.com/how-our-paraphrasing-service-works/</a> are there to empower you.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17722571827248259655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-77501534468480580802019-02-18T08:02:46.960+00:002019-02-18T08:02:46.960+00:00Certainly, understudies ought to examine the thing...Certainly, understudies ought to examine the things with their instructors which they see on web while seeking about training. They ought to right off the <a href="https://www.paraphrasingservices.net/pros-and-cons-of-paraphrase-generator/" rel="nofollow">useful reference</a> bat do the responsibility with the instructor and after that utilization that specific whole in the tests.Hildegard Flatleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17834571338997127323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-91667323145282791092019-01-22T14:56:05.464+00:002019-01-22T14:56:05.464+00:00Great job done by you for the promotion of this bl...Great job done by you for the promotion of this blog. A quality content goes a long way to promote your work <a href="http://capstoneprojectideas.com/list-of-the-best-capstone-project-ideas-for-english-literature/" rel="nofollow">check it here</a>. Thank you for the friendly in sharing.Rick Curryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06306969597914612804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-54442583451149056132015-11-26T06:53:26.430+00:002015-11-26T06:53:26.430+00:00Hey,
I am not a native speaker, for me it is uncl...Hey,<br /><br />I am not a native speaker, for me it is unclear when to use mnotone vs. monotonous. Eg. can my work be non-monotonous or non-monotone? <br />Great article btw.hauptphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13884381787711380013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-30355670328048961732012-03-08T20:22:02.038+00:002012-03-08T20:22:02.038+00:00@Nicole-facial expressions get old very quickly to...@Nicole-facial expressions get old very quickly too. <br /><br />Thanks for the award, very nice of you to think of me.mooderinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01523337588830695638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-79208411721122641852012-03-08T18:36:46.162+00:002012-03-08T18:36:46.162+00:00Someone above mentioned whether "said" c...Someone above mentioned whether "said" could become repetitious. I would say it can be, but then on the other hand, phrases like, "he cried," "she grunted," "he exclaimed," "she sighed," "he shouted," "she exclaimed," can get just as monotonous. <br /><br />Another monotonous habit of my own is the nonverbals of my character. I'm in a first draft now, but when I go back I have to rewrite some scenes. There are so many nods that people can do without it getting ridiculous.<br /><br />By the way, I don't know if you accept blog awards, but I have just passed one along to you!Nicole Pyleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06920135146911951755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-1586557661281810042012-03-08T18:16:24.930+00:002012-03-08T18:16:24.930+00:00@Stephen-I think you can play around with exact am...@Stephen-I think you can play around with exact amount of one ting vs another to suit your own taste, just as long as you have some variety.<br /><br />@Julie-true. same with ove-describing everything, makes it hard to know which are the important things.<br /><br />@Golden-any time you deliberately try to create an effect I think that's fair enough. Whether it works or not it's still a valid approach.<br /><br />@Michael-thanks, man. Very nice of you to say.<br /><br />@Lydia-I agree, I used to defend the boring stuff like it proved my worth as a writer. Better to let your writing do the talking.mooderinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01523337588830695638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-66751024920483202992012-03-08T02:34:03.347+00:002012-03-08T02:34:03.347+00:00Well said, Moody. I try to pick out the monotony a...Well said, Moody. I try to pick out the monotony after my first draft. It's so much easier for me to see now than when I first started writing.Lydia Kanghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00484415427764822386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-67902662999961134082012-03-08T01:44:38.938+00:002012-03-08T01:44:38.938+00:00Hey, Mood,
You nailed another great post. Many of...Hey, Mood,<br /><br />You nailed another great post. Many of us do get bogged down by repetition. Your examples clarify so much. Well done.<br /><br />I always appreciate your no-nonsense way of simplifying writing situations and make the easy and clear for all of us to understand. Thanks. You are a shining star in our community.Michael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-73421769320748272422012-03-07T23:04:33.790+00:002012-03-07T23:04:33.790+00:00I recently read a book on writing fiction that emp...I recently read a book on writing fiction that emphasized repetitions/patterns (<i>Plot</i> by Ansen Dibell) but also pointed out what you just did--readers will notice repetition, so you have to be careful where it is and if it's intentional or not.<br /><br />(And I love the "mostly harmless" addition at the end of your post. :))Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-6972734567624847072012-03-07T16:16:45.850+00:002012-03-07T16:16:45.850+00:00I've noticed a similar problem in some types o...I've noticed a similar problem in some types of writing where the sentence structures themselves are repeated--no variation in length, addition of power words, and lots of lyrical language.<br /><br />Monotonous sentence structure makes it difficult for the reader to separate the important, emotional or pivotal moments from the rest of the writing.<br /><br />Like looking at a busy collage of pictures--unless some pictures are given more prominence, our eyes don't know where to settle, so we just skim the whole thing.Julie Daineshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08350205936357263571noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-16106935684297300482012-03-07T15:50:55.470+00:002012-03-07T15:50:55.470+00:00I believe in balance and the time between action s...I believe in balance and the time between action scenes is an opportunity for character development, character arc, and reflection.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-16295190066515514182012-03-07T12:47:03.279+00:002012-03-07T12:47:03.279+00:00@Rachna-me too.
@Alexis-I think reading your own...@Rachna-me too. <br /><br />@Alexis-I think reading your own stuff out loud also helps (tedious as it can be).mooderinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01523337588830695638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-73993629082509756432012-03-07T06:44:52.772+00:002012-03-07T06:44:52.772+00:00Repetition is the first thing I notice when critiq...Repetition is the first thing I notice when critiquing for others - but I hardly ever in my own stuff. Sometimes the 'search' function is the best tool ever. :) Happy Writing!Alexis Basshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00635465457833459349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-36383263974142539722012-03-06T16:30:37.375+00:002012-03-06T16:30:37.375+00:00I usually spot repetition in my critique partners...I usually spot repetition in my critique partners' work but tend to overlook mine. Earlier I used to indulge in repetition but now I am a bit more careful. Great post.Rachna Chhabriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16900999965919504282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-1571075769201909212012-03-06T11:17:43.968+00:002012-03-06T11:17:43.968+00:00@Michael-it can be.
The conventional wisdom is th...@Michael-it can be.<br /><br />The conventional wisdom is that 'said' is considered to be the best word to use in a dialogue tag, mainly because synonyms tend to be distracting and noticeable and take away from the dialogue itself. The way someone says something should be self-evident (screenplays are a good source for seeing how effective this can be).<br /><br />The brain is astute enough to be able to tell the differnece between real variety and half-hearted attempts. So:<br /><br />Peter ran up the stairs, sprinted along the hall, and hurried into the room.<br /><br />even though I'm using different words for 'run' it just feels like I went thesaurus-crazy, and that's how it often feels with 'creative' dialogue tags. This is exaggerated by the fact that dialogue tags appear in large chunks of writing at the end of each line, forming an eye-catching pattern.<br /><br />However, you can still throw in 'he whispered' or 'she shouted' where you feel it's imprtant to specify how someone speaks. Just don't overdo it.<br /><br />It is possible when you have a large chunk of dialogue that all the he said/she said gets a bit plinkety-plonk as you read it. In those cases often you can leave the dialogue tag out altogether (if it's obvioius who's speaking) or you can use action tags that describe what the person is doing, as the dialogue will be assumed to belong to that person:<br /><br />Jane looked out the window. "Nice sunset, don't you think?"<br /><br />Overall though readers are used to seeing a lot of 'said' and so they don't register it as strongly as other words, so it's a bit of a special case.mooderinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01523337588830695638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-79181388532387953932012-03-06T11:01:58.491+00:002012-03-06T11:01:58.491+00:00@EJ-it's a really hard thing to get right thou...@EJ-it's a really hard thing to get right though.<br /><br />@Alex-so true. Usually really obvious when it's pointed out to you.<br /><br />@Donna-balancing a consistent tone with a varied narrative is no easy task.mooderinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01523337588830695638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-8346363084033991462012-03-06T05:24:41.375+00:002012-03-06T05:24:41.375+00:00What about using the word "said" over an...What about using the word "said" over and over as a conversation tag? Can that be monotonous if overdone?Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-12619441045152882282012-03-06T00:26:13.100+00:002012-03-06T00:26:13.100+00:00I had that problem with my first novel - too much ...I had that problem with my first novel - too much of the same sentiments running through the scenes. Different people and settings, same emotional content.<br /><br />I've read this problem in other novels I've read, making it so one novel in the series is enough and halfway through the first book I'm ready to put it down.<br /><br />I thank my crit partners profusely when they spot these errors in my own writing.<br /><br />......dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-411404286360882912012-03-05T23:47:21.781+00:002012-03-05T23:47:21.781+00:00Point taken. Nice post. I need to take a look at m...Point taken. Nice post. I need to take a look at my own scenes. I may have overloaded on fast pacing. Thanks for the heads-up.Gailnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-47199810817610216522012-03-05T23:40:16.939+00:002012-03-05T23:40:16.939+00:00Point taken. Nice post. Made me think about the rh...Point taken. Nice post. Made me think about the rhythm in my own work in progress. I have a feeling that a large % of my scenes are pretty fast paced, especially in the becoming. Thanks for sharing.Gailnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-34792323135356340282012-03-05T23:17:42.929+00:002012-03-05T23:17:42.929+00:00Oddly enough, repetition is sometimes difficult to...Oddly enough, repetition is sometimes difficult to spot in our own works. (Critique partners have no problems though!)Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1061937348591302555.post-29442604329618644192012-03-05T21:46:24.287+00:002012-03-05T21:46:24.287+00:00Excellent point. There is such a thing as 'flo...Excellent point. There is such a thing as 'flow' to a story, and if it's overly consistent it can become stale. Good stories are like rivers; there are slow parts, fast parts, rapids, bends, etc. all culminating into something that takes you from A to B in a beautiful fashion.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00273059558675234923noreply@blogger.com