Often, when a writer asks for feedback on a work in progress, they will
ask for the reader to pay attention to things like story, character, pace, and
to not bother too much with spelling or grammar or other nit-picky elements at
this stage.
The reason for this is pretty obvious. It’s early in the development of
the story and most of those minor errors will be taken care of during the
polishing and fine-tuning stages which will happen once the story is more or
less completed.
Right now, all the writer wants is an overview of how things are taking
shape and whether the premise seems interesting and engaging.
Which is fair enough. But there is a slight problem.


























































